A Story About Following Your Dreams – Romi Moondi at TEDxYouth@Toronto

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Competency #1: Topic*

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Chooses & Narrows Topic Appropriately For Audience?
Chooses & Narrows Topic Appropriately For Situation?

Competency #2: Thesis*

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Communicates Thesis/Specific Purpose Appropriately to Audience?
Communicates Thesis/Specific Purpose Appropriately for Situation?

Competency #3: Support*

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Provides Supporting Material Appropriate to Audience?
Provides Supporting Material Appropriate to Situation?
Cites Sources Accurately?

Competency #4: Organization*

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	Unsatisfactory	Satisfactory	Excellent
Uses Organizational Pattern Appropriate for Topic?
Uses Organizational Pattern Appropriate for Audience?
Uses Organizational Pattern Appropriate for Occasion?
Uses Organizational Pattern Appropriate for Purpose?

Competency #5: Language*

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Uses Language Appropriate to Audience?
Uses Language Appropriate to Situation?

Competency #6: Vocal Dynamism*

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Uses Pitch/Inflection to Heighten & Maintain Awareness in Audience?
Uses Volume to Heighten & Maintain Awareness in Audience?
Uses Speech Rate to Heighten & Maintain Awareness in Audience?
Uses Vocal Variety Appropriate to Audience & Occasion?

Competency #7: Pronunciation, Grammar, Articulation*

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	Unsatisfactory	Satisfactory	Excellent
Uses Pronunciation, Grammar &/or Articulation Appropriate to Audience?
Uses Pronunciation, Grammar &/or Articulation Appropriate to Situation?

Competency #8: Physical Delivery*

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Uses Physical Behaviors That Support The Verbal Message?

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Content*

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Complex Material Presented as Clear?
Used Appropriate Strategies to Explain? (ie, metaphors, similies)
Avoided Fallacies?
Used Well-Reasoned Arguments?
Appropriately Created A Sense That Problem Exists?
Identified & Clearly Explained Cause(s) of Problem?
Provided Clear Solutions (Steps) Applicable for This Audience?

Language*

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Persuasive in Nature?
Used Oral Language Appropriate to Audience?
Clearly Explained Jargon? (ie, definitions)
Used Emotional Appeal?

Supporting Material*

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Used Accurate, Relevant & Timely Supporting Material?
Used Sufficient Quantity of Sources?
Orally Cited Sources Accurately? (date & source)

Organization*

Introduction

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Captured Attention Effectively?
Stated Topic Clearly?
Related Topic to This Audience?
Provided Credibility? (if applicable)
Previewed Main Points?

Organization*

Body

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Organized Main Points Clearly & Logically?
Included Transitions Between Main Points?
Adequately Used Internal Previews with Main Points?
Adequately Used Signposts in Main Points?

Organization*

Conclusion

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Summarized Main Points?
Ended with Effective Memorable Final Thought?
Tied Closure into Attention Getter?

Delivery*

Vocal Delivery

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	Yes	Somewhat	No
Rate Appropriate?
Volume Appropriate?
Varied Pitch and Inflection?
Clear Articulation & Pronunciation?
Appropriate Use of Pauses/Lack of Fillers?

Delivery*

Physical Delivery

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Used Effective & Inclusive Eye Contact?
Posture Comfortable?
Varied Facial Expressions?
Used Natural Gestures (not distracting)?
Speech Was Extemporaneous?

Visual Aids

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Used Visual Aids Appropriately?
Used Relevant, Professional Visual Aids?
Clearly Discussed Content Provided in Visual Aids?
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Content*

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Complex Material Presented as Clear?
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Language*

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	Yes	Somewhat	No
Unbiased/Informative?
Used Oral Language Appropriate to Audience?
Clearly Explained Jargon? (ie, definitions)

Supporting Material*

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	Yes	Somewhat	No
Used Accurate, Relevant & Timely Supporting Material?
Used Sufficient Quantity of Sources?
Orally Cited Sources Accurately? (date & source)

Organization

Introduction

	Yes	Somewhat	No
	Yes	Somewhat	No
Captured Attention Effectively?
Stated Topic Clearly?
Related Topic to This Audience?
Provided Credibility? (if applicable)
Previewed Main Points?

Organization

Body

	Yes	Somewhat	No
	Yes	Somewhat	No
Organized Main Points Clearly & Logically?
Included Transitions Between Main Points?
Adequately Used Internal Previews with Main Points?
Adequately Used Signposts in Main Points?

Organization

Conclusion

	Yes	Somewhat	No
	Yes	Somewhat	No
Summarized Main Points?
Ended with Effective Memorable Final Thought?
Tied Closure into Attention Getter?

Delivery*

Vocal Delivery

	Yes	Somewhat	No
	Yes	Somewhat	No
Rate Appropriate?
Volume Appropriate?
Varied Pitch and Inflection?
Clear Articulation & Pronunciation?
Appropriate Use of Pauses/Lack of Fillers?

Delivery

Physical Delivery

	Yes	Somewhat	No
	Yes	Somewhat	No
Used Effective & Inclusive Eye Contact?
Posture Comfortable?
Varied Facial Expressions?
Used Natural Gestures (not distracting)?
Speech Was Extemporaneous?

Visual Aids*

	Yes	Somewhat	No
	Yes	Somewhat	No
Used Visual Aids Appropriately?
Used Relevant, Professional Visual Aids?
Clearly Discussed Content Provided in Visual Aids?
Fluidity of Presentation Maintained During Visual Aids Usage?

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Watch Romi Moondi’s hilarious, heartfelt and inspiring talk at TEDxYouth@Toronto 2013 about her journey of following her dream to become an author, leaving behind the comfort of a corporate job.

Romi Moondi is a lifelong writer who recently found success as a self-published author, which led to a six-month stay in Paris to pursue these endeavors full time. With a Bachelor of Business degree and nine years of working experience in the corporate world, Romi was the unlikeliest of candidates when it came to pursuing a dream abroad. It was never an inevitable path, but happened little by little, as she used her free evenings and weekends to write both screenplays and novels, improved her craft by reading books on writing, performed well in many international screenplay competitions, and published three books. All this, while excelling at her full time job in Print Promotions for Canadian Tire Corp.

TEDxYouth@Toronto brings together a line-up of inspiring speakers, spectacular performers, and Toronto’s inquisitive young minds in the spirit of “ideas worth spreading”. TEDxYouth@Toronto was hosted on Nov 16, 2013 at the Ontario Science Centre, Canada. For more information, please visit http://tedxyouthtoronto.ca/

In the spirit of ideas worth spreading, TEDx is a program of local, self-organized events that bring people together to share a TED-like experience. At a TEDx event, TEDTalks video and live speakers combine to spark deep discussion and connection in a small group. These local, self-organized events are branded TEDx, where x = independently organized TED event. The TED Conference provides general guidance for the TEDx program, but individual TEDx events are self-organized.* (*Subject to certain rules and regulations)

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